Living by the stone
He carved out figures.
Cut by cut, scrap by scrap
With his little fingers, eroding his worst fears.
Fear that his pain might be too small
To achieve that epitome of an image
Where corners were points and edges true lines.
A pound of pain, a ton of labour
Never a torture, sheer ardour
Just a constant pegging away at God’s will;
Perfection isn’t ever served on a platter.
Why stone did he choose?
When roses abound and petals lay strewn.
What path did he choose?
That none traversed and little had known.
This query they put, then back he shot:
“What fun there is in mocking the mocked?
Carving out garlands, anyone could
But a canvas of stone, only I would paint.
A new beginning from where would emerge.
Where all treaded the beaten path,
A dead end reached where nothing diverged.”
So back he went to work,
Driven by a desire to leave no stone unturned.
Cut by cut, scrap by scrap,
Thus were eroded his worst fears with his now content fingers.
(A new composition...hope you like it. Comments would, as always, be welcome.)
11 comments:
hmm..
have always been a fan of ur poetry..
but this one..passes them all..
great going buddy :)
Sheikh! You grew up big time man!
Great going buddy... with this one you have raised your personal best to an all time high!
And so Ravi Bansal rises above rhyme! Your poetry has now gone to the next level. Please don't stop with this- keep up the momentum; 4th yr is the best time to blog.
@ rahul, abhishek, abhinav
Thanx guys...even I regard this as my finest creation till date. I hope I continue in the same vein.
@ akshay
Yeah, finally I rose above rhyme. I wrote a poem after 4 years..and I guess that the maturity I have gained has translated into the poem also.
Can't find anything abstract or abstruse as you would put it about this masterpiece. Depressingly inspiring, I thought that was a Dravid eulegy after ging through the first 2 stanzas.
Hmmm...it had to sound Dravidian...u couldn't have expected me to glorify anything else...could u?
And were you seriously serious about that masterpiece stuff, or was that my construct??
great man..the lines and thoughts are awesome..
@ Rahul
Thanx man...keep reading.
good one!! :-)
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